Thursday, November 29, 2007

Argumentative Essay

Global Warming

The global warming is an event that will affect many people and animals all over the world. Humans will be affected the most due to global warming things like temperature increase. Many people believe in global warming although some people disagree.

Supporters of global warming argue that the global warming is good when the globe to be a little warmer. They want warmer sunshine, and less good cold. Moreover, some people believe that the world uses greenhouse gases to help capture the sun’s energy in keep the Earth warm that is needed to sustain life. However, without these greenhouse gases, the Earth would reduce to zero degrees Fahrenheit

Opponents of global warming argue that global warming causing lot of problem to our society. They believe that pollution may harm crop, and in some cases it may kill crops, because the kind of pollution that can be associated with global warming is carbon dioxide which is beneficial to crops. In addition, the increase in the population of the world may be affecting us in more ways than previously thought. The increase in population is directly related to global warming based on the fact that as the population increases. However, increasing and spread of disease around the world. People also believe that global warming causing problem, for example burning of fossil fuels like oil and coal causes greenhouse gases and which is escape into air and that these gases are causing most of the warming. Another cause is deforestation which mean cutting down trees.

Global warming is a very difficult problem to fix. People are having a hard time agreeing on what to do about it. For example, everyone agrees that wasting energy is a bad thing to do. But some people think that the federal government should make laws about it, while other people think it should be up to each person or business to decide what to do.
In conclusion, I think that we may not be able to stop the process entirely, but we can try to keep the climate from reaching a point that we can’t stop it. If everyone in the world stop polluting and begin keeping their environment clean it would help. Global warming many not be stopped but it can be reduced.

3 comments:

!!!!!Espin!!!!!!! said...

This is a good argumentative essay in the introduction & conclusion: 2, because in the conclusion has 2 paragraphs together, in the main points: 3, organization 3, Works cited: 2, Mechanics: 2 cause in a couple of sentences needs comas, capitalization... good job.

Unknown said...

This would be a good essay if you were to use the correct punctuation and the proper grammer. Pay more attention to how you are wording your sentences and be sure to site resources. Other than that Thanks. This essay was helpful.

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Unknown said...

sounds like this essay was translated into english and not reworded. otherwise is quite usefull